I will have a short presentation tomorrow. Please help me correct this text. Thanks.
"Today, I will present a product, which is MP3 player. MP3 player is a portable electronic device that allows you to store and play file in mp3 format. It's a rectangle with 10cm long and 8cm wide, 2 cm high. The color of it is blue. It's price is 1000000 đ. I think it is worth this price because it is small and easy to carry around. Also, it has big memory, about 32 gigabite. So, it can store hundereds or thousands of file. You can use it for listening music to relax, or listening English to learn. Generally, all file in mp3 format can be act by it. So, it is very useful and convenient"
"Today, I will present a product, which is an MP3 player. An MP3 player is a portable electronic device that allows you to store and play music files in the mp3 format. It's a rectangle rectangular with and it is 10cm long and 8cm wide, 2 cm high. The color of it is blue. It's price is 1000000 đ. I think it is worth this price because it is small and easy to carry around. Also, it has big a lot of memory, about 32 gigabytesite. So, it can store hundereds or thousands of file. You can use it for listening music to relax, or listening to English lessons to learn. Generally, all files in mp3 format can be act accessed by it (or you could say, "All mp3 files can be used"). So, it is very useful and convenient"
Nice job. - Greg
