The sky was overcast today. Dad finally shook off the flu and his hangover, and the first thing he did was correct my homework. Unfortunately, it didn’t go well. I’d made so many mistakes that he blew his top. He has banned me from using my cellphone until I redo all of them, even on a Sunday. Now my mood’s gloomier than the sky. And it seems unlikely for me to be able to finish all these in time.

The sky was overcast today. Dad finally shook off the flu and his hangover, and the first thing he did was correct my homework. Unfortunately, it didn’t go well. I’d made too many mistakes and he blew his top. He forbade me to use my cellphone until I had redone all of them, even on a Sunday. Now my mood’s gloomier than the sky. And it seems unlikely for me to be able to finish all these in time.