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My profile in my CV I have great passion for hospitality industry, liked to contact and assist people with my cordial smile. The passion made me energetic all the time. I like to challenge myself by unusual experience. I have travelled and worked as waitress in New Zealand for one year. I have open mind and adventure spirit like westerner; I am modest and work hard like Asian.
19 Thg 05 2013 11:43
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My profile in my CV

I have a great passion for the hospitality industry, and I like liked to greet contact and assist people with my cordial smile. The My passion for people makes made me energetic all the time. I like to challenge myself with by unusual experiences. I have travelled and worked as a waitress in New Zealand for one year. I have an open mind and an adventurous adventure spirit like a westerner; I am modest and work hard like Asian.

 

Very good! 'greet' instead of 'contact' because greeting is positive, contact is just neutral. 

I changed to 'My passion for people', guessing, because there are many kinds of passion!

like is present tense, makes is present tense, adventurous is an adjective for spirit.

19 tháng 5 năm 2013
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