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At colleges,sports/activities are as important as classes and should receive equal financial support I definitely agree with the first part of the statement that sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries. As to the second part, I don't think universities should give equal financial support of both of them. I prefer the classes and libraries get prior financial support, and if there are extra money, sports and social activities can be supported. First, sports and social activities significantly effect a person's life, so college students should participate in all kinds of sports and attend vary social activities. Students mainly learn former people's experience from classes and books,actually the ability to use them in real life is more important. How can one use or create without healthy body? How can one solve problems in their job without the ability to deal with complex situation? Sports can make you healthier, furthermore they can give you the chance to communicate with people who have similar interest as you. Activities can either pratise the ability of ognization or to deal with all kinds of problems. We can benefit from sports and activities as much as from classes. One example can prove that classes and activities are both important. Majiajue who was a high-score student in Yunan university of China, he couldn't get alone well with his roommates, and he didn't know how to solve this problem. His fury increased everyday, but he neither had a friend nor belonging to any community to let his emotion released. Finally, he killed three roommates just before the graduation. Second, universities are places to delivery knowledge and experience of human beings. So keep the classes in fine condition and books in libraries update quickly are the main responsibility of universities. Financial support should be prior to these aspects. If there were extra money, they would also use in building sports courts or holding activities. Third, students can paticipate in vary activities not only relying on the support of colleges,but also the effort of themselves. They can search for local resoures around campus to do sports. Additionally, they can apply finacial aid from comecial companies to orgnize sport games or social activities. The processes to search for resource or money are also good practice of their abilities. In conclusion, activities are as important as classes, colleges should support classes and libraries at first, and partly support other activities if they can. Students need to try their best to attend activities.
31 Thg 03 2014 03:30
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At colleges,sports/activities are as important as classes and should receive equal financial support

 

I definitely agree with the first part of the statement that sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries. As to for the second part, I don't think universities should give equal financial support of to both of them. I prefer think that classes and libraries should get prior financial support first, and if there are is extra money, sports and social activities can be supported.

First, sports and social activities significantly eaffect a person's life, so college students should participate in all kinds of sports and attend varyious social activities. Students mainly learn about former people's experiences from classes and books (Like stories from biographies? Or do you mean knowledge from previous scientists and scholars?) , but actually / even though the ability to use them in real life is more important. How can one use (use what?) or create without a healthy body? How can one solve problems in their job without the ability to deal with complex situations? Sports can make you healthier, furthermore they can give you the chance to communicate with people who have similar interests as you. Activities can either help you pratise practice the ability of ognization organization or to the ability of dealing with all kinds of problems. We can benefit from sports and activities as much as from classes. (This last sentence should be your topic sentence

 

One example can prove that classes and activities are both important. Majiajue, who was a high-scoreing student in Yunan university of China, he couldn't get alone along well with his roommates, and he didn't know how to solve this problem. His fury increased everyday, but he neither had a friend nor belongeding to any community to help him process his emotions/let his emotion released. Finally, he killed three roommates just before the graduation. 

Second, universities are places to delivery knowledge and experience of human beings (I don't know what you mean by "experience of human beings). So keeping the classes in fine good condition and the books in libraries updated quickly in a timely fashion / efficently are the main responsibilityies of universities. Financial support should be prior to these aspects. If there were is extra money, they would should also use it in building  to build sports courts facilities or holding activities (What are holding activities?).

Third, students can paticipate participate in various activities not only relying on the support of colleges, but also the effort of themselves. They can search for local resoures resources around campus to do sports. Additionally, they can apply for finacial financial aid from commercial companies to organize sport games or social activities. The processes to of searching for resources or money are is also good practice of their abilities.

In conclusion, activities are as important as classes,. Colleges should support classes and libraries at first, and partly support other activities if they can. Students need to try their best to attend activities.

31 tháng 3 năm 2014
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