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Dorstig! Vandag was het erg warm. ik was erg dorstig. Ik hebt sinaasapplesap. Het was lekker!
10 Thg 07 2014 20:16
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Dorstig!

Vandag was het erg warm. ik was erg dorstig. Ik hebt sinaasapplesap. Het was lekker!

 

Best goed hoor! Dit is de correcte versie:

 

Dorstig!

Vandaag w

10 tháng 7 năm 2014
1

Dorstig!

Vandag was het erg warm. ik was erg dorstig. Ik hebt sinaasapplesap. Het was lekker!V

 

 

"Vaandag was het erg warm. Ik was erg dorstig. Ik hebt sinaasapplesap. Het was lekker!"

 

11 tháng 7 năm 2014
1

Dorstig!

Vandag was het erg warm. ik was erg dorstig. Ik hebt sinaasapplesap. Het was lekker!

Dorstig!

Vandaag was het erg warm. Ik was erg dorstig. Ik heb sinaasappelsap gedronken. Dat was erg lekker.

10 tháng 7 năm 2014
"Vandaag was het erg warm. Ik was erg dorstig. Ik had sinaasappelsap gedronken (past tense??). Het was lekker!" Nice syntactic chain: "erg warm" so "erg dorstig" Capital letters begin with each sentence. Wrong spellings: "Vandag" should be "Vandaag", and "sinaasapplesap" is spelled "sinaasappelsap"///
11 tháng 7 năm 2014
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