安Ann
The weather is so good The weather is so good since last friday, becayse the large rain took away the hot weather. Every time, when l go to work, l am so comfortable and powerful. The wind is so comfortable, l like it very much. Actually, l hate the summer very much. In the summer, l will be allergic and dizziness, l am so uncomfortable and donot want to have a meal. So when the weather is hot, l will always in the interior, l cannot go to travel. Most important is my skin will turn black, my friends always tell me that l amnot suitable for the black skin. PS:Thank you for correcting my entries. Have a nice day! Ann
29 Thg 07 2014 11:51
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The Weather Is So Good
The weather is so good since last friday, because the large rainfall took away the hotness. Now when l go to the work, l feel so comfortable and powerful. The wind is so nice and l like it very much. Actually, l hate the summer very much. In the summer, the hot weather causes allergy and dizziness for me, l feel so uncomfortable and do not want to have a meal. So when the weather is hot, l stay at the home, l don't travel. Most important thing is my skin turns darker, my friends always are tell me that the dark cololur skin doesn't quite suit me.

29 tháng 7 năm 2014

The weather is so good

The weather is has been so good (you could probably use the word "nice" here instead) since last friday, because the a large rain took away the hot weather. Every time, when l go to work, l am feel so comfortable and powerful. The wind is makes me feel so comfortable, l like it very much. Actually, l hate the summer very much. In the summer, l will be have a lot of problems with allergies and dizziness. l am so uncomfortable and donot don't want to eat have a meal. So when the weather is hot, l will always be inside in the interior. l can't go to travel. Most importantly, is my skin will turn darker black, my friends always tell me that l'm not suited for the black darker skin.
PS:Thank you for correcting my entries. Have a nice day! Ann

 

No problem.  You have a nice day too.:)

29 tháng 7 năm 2014
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