Hey over there!
I wonder if you have read Will Grayson[,] written by John Green and David Levithan.
If so,[ ]let me know[--]I would love to hear your thought[s] and share mine with you. :-)

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Hey over there!<)>
I wonder if you have read< Will Grayson> Will Grayson written by John Green and David Levithan.
If so,let me know<,>I would love to hear your thought and share mine with you. :-)