谢谢！你的英语很好。加油！

Hello~ I think your Chinese is very well. but,strictly speaking,we use “、” this punctuation to Instead of “ ，” in this case（to express parallel）,we call it “顿号[dùn hào]”,and it not exist in English. “我是一名大学生，我的专业是工商管理。我喜欢听歌、看电影、看书和旅游。” I’m a college student too,I major in Marketing.(I‘m sorry my English is poor,I spend many times to translate there sentence,and I don't know if I express it clearly.)

It is good. don't need to correct. come on