君临‘
My breakfast Today is sunny day,I have breakfast for eight o 'clock.Today's breakfast is 嵌糕Wenling,it's my favorite food!Have noodles, celery, potatoes and carrots in the rice cake.
20 Thg 10 2014 06:30
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My breakfast

Today is a sunny day.  [1] I have had [2] breakfast for at eight [3] o 'clock.  Today's breakfast is was 嵌糕Wenling,  it's my favorite food!Have It has noodles, celery, potatoes and carrots in the a rice cake.

 

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[1] You have started a new topic, therefore you should start a new sentence.

[2] You had breakfast this morning, which requires using the past tense.

[3] Writing "eight o'clock" is actually the correct grammar, not "8 o'clock".  Well done!

 

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I have corrected two of your Notebook entries, and each time it has made me feel hungry.  The photos you include show delicious-looking food!

20 tháng 10 năm 2014
Thank you very much!
20 tháng 10 năm 2014
I think it should be "at 8 o'clock", not "for eignht o'clock"
20 tháng 10 năm 2014
celery 为什么不用复数形式?,其他都用了,而且芹菜是个可数名词吧
20 tháng 10 năm 2014
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