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topic:
Some people think that advertising only promotes the sales of products but has no effect in improving their quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As a way of promoting sales of goods, advertising appears in every all over the corner of the modern world,but a sort of some people think it's useless in improving for up the quality of products. In my opinion, advertising is not only good for the sales,but also useful for increasing the quality.
Production truely depends on the advertising nowadays. An excellent advertisement can let the informs a large audience huge range users to know that there is a new product will be launched. and A good advertisement is also artistic is a art products,it uses the bright colors or special ideas to show introduce the elements/characteristics characters of the new products things. The perfect example is the APPLE Corporation,when it holds a the launch event,hundreds of millions of people are were waiting on front of the Internet to watch view the new devices, then queueing waiting to buy for buying them .
On the other hand aspect , advertisements can subtly improve the quality. inobviously ,Consumers are aware of people could know the new features and functions through the advertising,hence the engineers of the company have to enhance their way of production strategies and continue to launch different kinds of new products. ,What ‘s more ,users can also could compare the newer models ones with the old devices through the advertisement,and after that , they can give some recommendations for to the company to help them in developing a modification of this series of products.
In conclusion, I recognise that the advertising is also a good way to accelerate the development of quality of different sorts of products,except as well as for promoting the sales. Each company could find benefits treasure from the advertising, hence making a great improvement in the future.