( part 3 ) A personal statement, can someone help me by correcting this essay? XXXX made a very good impression on me, promoting specialist with innovative concept, who are creative, open-minded and deeply passionate about their professional areas. What is really important for me is that XXXX has high morals, treats designers in a good, equal way and teaches the students to pay close attention to the quality of their designed products. This is such a special, modern College compiling technical and artistic aspect together, where the atmosphere is very special and students can make original designs. What I really like in this School’s educational system is the freedom to actively take part in diversified projects. Also, they respect traditional style of art. To add, XXXX has one of the best workshops in the whole Europe with high level of technology and advanced hi-tech equipment, which enables accomplishing even the very difficult projects and tasks. I want to independently work on creative designs, which will be different from others. I know I will find inspiration in this place and train my abilities. After graduation I plan to create my own brand which will mix Chinese traditional elements with modern western culture. I hope I can create new quality according to my vision, develop my own, special style.