Sergey
Old House 2 Morning fog took the old house in its soft captivity. The plaster on its walls was covered in a network of fine cracks. Drops of water collected as if in a creek and then they flowed down the unpredictable trajectory. Here a child would have seen a map of the Amazon estuary with himself in a canoe floating on the dangerous water. Inside, the house has a wooden staircase with "musical" steps and a loft with some pigeons. The creaking steps and cooing pigeons did not give loneliness live in this house .
23 Thg 11 2014 14:54
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Old House 2

Morning fog took the old house in its soft captivity. The plaster on its walls was covered in a network of fine cracks. Drops of water collected as if in a creek, and then they flowed down the unpredictable trajectory. Here a child would have seen a map of the Amazon estuary, with himself in a canoe floating on the dangerous water. Inside, the house had [1] a wooden staircase with "musical" steps, and a loft with some pigeons. The creaking steps and cooing pigeons did not give loneliness live in this house.

 

[1]  The entire rest of the paragraph was written in the past tense, so it was necessary to use the past tense "had".

 

The very last phrase which I underlined is hard to understand.  Here is something which I think comes close to what you wanted to say:  ... did not give an air of loneliness to the house.

   

23 tháng 11 năm 2014
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