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friday in my cauntry today is holiday and very warm day in my cauntry (algeria) i decided with some friends to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying juma
20 Thg 02 2015 12:08
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Friday in my Country (1)

Today is a holiday. It is a very warm day in my country, Algeria. (2) My friends and I decided to go to the dam and fish this evening, after Jumu'ah. (3)(4)

 

(1) Titles in English have capitals on most words.

(2) I would say that "Today is a holiday" and "it is a very warm day" are separate ideas, needing their own sentences.

(3) Did you decide with friends, or did you decide by yourself? Here, I structured your sentence as if you and your friends decided together.

(4) Would you pray Jumu'ah at the dam or would you go to the dam after Jumu'ah? Here, I decided you wanted to go to the dam after Friday Prayers.

 

Have fun with the English!

26 tháng 5 năm 2015

Friday in my country

Today is holiday and a very warm day in my country, Algeria. I decided  to go to the dam with some friends and catch some fish this evening after praying juma (Friday prayer).

8 tháng 5 năm 2015

Friday in my Country

Today is a holiday and a very warm day in my Country, (Algeria). My friends and I decided to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying Juma.

2 tháng 6 năm 2015

friday in my cauntry

today is holiday and very warm day in my cauntry (algeria) i decided with some friends to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying juma

20 tháng 4 năm 2015

friday in my cauntry

today is holiday and very warm day in my cauntry (algeria) i decided with some friends to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying juma

Friday in my country.

Today is a holiday and very warm in my country of Algeria. I decided to go to the dam with some friends this evening to fish after praying. 

20 tháng 4 năm 2015
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