刘帮传
China As we all know,China is an ancient civilization with profound cuture.its heard that its very difficult to study Chinese.But it is so amazing to learn ancient poems,And we can see magical classic books.Welcome to China and learn more about Chinese culture,I can teach you Chinese and at the time,I practiced my English.The goal I study English is to get another key to the other world!
27 Thg 02 2015 22:38
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China

As we all know, China is an ancient civilization with profound cuture. It's [Sentences start with a capital, and when abbreviating 'it is' the form is 'it's' with an apostrophe after the 't'] heard that it's [same as before - 'it is' is shortened down to 'it's'] very difficult to study Chinese. But [In English we put a space after a full stop, or any form of punctuation] it is so amazing to learn ancient poems, and [the only words that are capitalised after a comma (or any punctuation other than a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark) are names and the pronoun 'I'] we can see magical classic books. Welcome to China and learn more about Chinese culture, I can teach you Chinese and at the same time I can practice my English. The reason [as you are explaining <em>why</em> you chose to study English you give a 'reason'] I study English is to get another key to the other world!

27 tháng 2 năm 2015
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