I live in Utah, USA, and I went on a vacation to NY for about one week.  It is a truly amazing city.  The whole city is alive, even at 3:00 in the morning.  I would also love to learn French and go to France.

Your post is perfect.  I only changed it to show some punctuation suggestions.  Here is how I would organize the sentences:

These are my plans to my future.

I'm from Colombia, and I'd like to visit NY and France.  For that reason, I'm studying English.  After that, I'll study French. With this page, I'd like to make friends and practice.