Writing in Romaji

Konnichiwa!

Hajimemashite, Doozo yoroshiku?. Watashi wa Jessica desu,. Watashi wa gakusei desu,. wWatashi no shumi wa dokusho to eiga desu.

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Hello Jessica, your writing was perfect! I corrected only small things.

When you say "yoroshiku onegai shimasu", it sounds more polite and natural. Just for your information.

I would like to know your favorite books and movies!

Writing in Romaji

Konnichiwa! 
Hajimemashite, Doozo yoroshiku? Watashi wa Jessica desu, Watashi wa gakusei desu, watashi no shumi wa dokusho to eiga wo mirukoto desu.

Writing in Romaji

Konnichiwa!

Hajimemashite, Doozo yoroshiku? Watashi wa Jessica desu, Watashi wa gakusei desu, watashi no shumi wa dokusho to eiga desu.

(If there is any mistakes in this or they could be a better phrasing than repeating wastashi constantly I'd be happy for any help.)