keep a diary (korea, 21 April 2015)

"We are Golden" - MIKA

I am loving this song recently.
and I know it is for teenagers, but I'm not one....ㅠㅠ (what is an expression to describe sad? like 'ㅠㅠ' <- it's korean)

I was tired and depressed a few days ago because of my career, so I didn't care for myself.
on One day, I got drunken and cried on street..... (sorry about that friends)

When I listen this song, I don't understand most of lyrics except 'we are golden'.
But it's impressive to me. That night, I searched on web about the song and singer.
I tried to sing the song although it's not easy. (so fast to me)
And I think that I have confidence, positivity and so on.

I wrote this diary for 2 hours. (even searching on dictionary)
It's so difficult. I need to learn more....ㅠㅠ
Thanks! :)

Note: Very good! Only little changes were needed. Also, an equivalent "sad" expression you could use would be T^T or :(

keeping a diary (korea, 21 April 2015)

We are golden - MIKA

I am have been loving this song recently.
and I knew know it is for teenagers, but I'm not....:(

Few days ago I was tired and depressed a few days ago because of my career, so I didn't take care of myself.
 One day, I got drunken and cried on the street..... (sorry about that friends)

When I listen this song, I don't understand most of lyrics except 'we are golden', but it's impressive to me. That night, I searched on the web about the song and singer.
I tried to sing the song although it was not easy. (too fast for me)
And I think that have confidence, positivity and so on.

I wrote this diary for 2 hours. (I even searched in the  dictionary)
It's so difficult. I need to learn more....ㅠㅠ
Thanks! :)

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Your English is good, keep it up! :)