撒坦大魔王
intorduce myself hello, my name is 刘晏i am a student and i come form China.i like singing and i want to be a singer.i like learning English,and i can teach English who want to learn.i can get along well with others.i am an outgoing girl.i have more pretend with others.if you want to make firend to me we can exchange our weixin or qq. thank you.
22 Thg 05 2015 14:11
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Introduction:

Hello, my name is 刘晏. I am a student and i come from China. I want to be a singer because I like to sing. I like to learn English, and I can teach English to anyone who wants to learn. I can get along well with others. I am an outgoing girl. I have more pretend with others. If you want to make friends with me, we can exchange our weixin or qq.
Thank you.

22 tháng 5 năm 2015
Remember that " I " is always written with a capital letter. That's the horrible mistake!
22 tháng 5 năm 2015
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