Introduction (Jiko shoukai)

Hajimemashite.

Watashi no namae wa Ka-ruson Sumisu desu.

UTech no gakusei desu. Shumi wa ongaku wo kikukoto to e o kakukoto desu. Senkou wa konpyuuta kagaku desu.

yo nensei desu. jamaikajin desu.

douzo yoroshiku onegai shimasu.

Good job! You wrote almost correct, why don't you write with the Japanese characters?