Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produ

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Nowadays our survival environment is more and more worse than before. Every day we are producing tons of garbage. Then we can’t deal with so many garbage in time, which it increase the pressure of our fragile environment. Whatever people buy a gift from the super mall or pack a gift by themselves, they all try to pact it luxury to look good. Not only all kinds of gift decorations but also many commodity decorations have the same problems. In order to improve the sales, company pays more attention to the boxes, bottles or other extra decorations. At the same times, the populations are continuing to increase in the world. Therefore, it produces loads of rubbish much further. I believe, if government make some polices, it can reduce the amount of rubbish. Many decorations could be recycled. From government to advocate the category of the rubbish, it’s a good way to reduce waste. Furthermore, it’s a good way to protect the environment and effectively use the resources. In addition, what is needed, therefore, is education. Government should educate people how to reduce rubbish, and should request company to reduce over decorations. What is meant by this that the whole society should take part in the action of how to protect our environment. Every individual is involved in the action which can make the huge influence. Government also can encourage people to contribute their good ideas to solve the problem. All in all through these ways, we definitely could reduce the rubbish and protect our environment.

18 Thg 06 2015 03:42

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

I believe, if government make implement/adopt some policies, it can reduce the amount of rubbish. Many decorations could be recycled. From Government to advocating the category classification?/categorisation? of the rubbish (China already separates recyclable rubbish), it’s is a good way to reduce waste. Furthermore, it’s a good way to protect the environment and effectively use the resources effectively (it is not wrong to put the adverb first, but it is better after the verb in this case).

In addition, what is needed, therefore, (it is unnecessary to use both 'in addition' and 'therefore') is education. Government should educate people how to reduce rubbish, and should request companies to reduce excess packaging over decorations. What is meant by this is that the whole society should take part in the action of/activities for how to protecting our environment. If every individual is involved in the action which this can make the have a huge influence/make a huge impact.

Government also can encourage people to contribute their good ideas to solve the problem. All in all In summary, through these ways/means/policies (haha IELTS linking phrases - they mean nothing!), we definitely could/can reduce the rubbish and protect our environment.

20 tháng 6 năm 2015

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays our survival(?) environment is more and more getting worse and worse ('worse' is already comparative, so you cannot use 'more' at the same time) than before. Every day we are producing tons of garbage. Then We can’t deal with so many much (not countable) garbage quickly enough in time, which and it increases the pressure of our fragile environment.

WhatWhenever people buy a gift from the super mall, or pack wrap a gift by themselves, they all try to pact wrap it luxuriously to look good. Not only all kinds of gift decorations but also many commodity decorations have the same problems. In order to improve the sales, the marketing company pays more attention to the packaging/boxes, bottles or other extra decorations. At the same times, the world populations are continuesing to increase in the world. Therefore, it increasingly produces loads of rubbish much further.

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