Natalia P
Finishing with unemployment In my country, Argentina, we work in average about 8 hours per day. I think it is a lot of time. I think the working day should be about 6 hours per day. Then, we would have more time to learn other things (and to develop us in other areas), read books (which help us to grow as human been), spend with our children (which is very important in childhood). If things were different, teachers of literature, sports, languages, etc. would have more work and better salaries. Artists would be more appreciated. In addition, if working day were shorter more people would be in the working market (less time, more people to do the work), an interesting way of finishing with unemployment.
30 Thg 06 2015 14:35
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Hi Natalia,

Excellent posting! I have provided some comments and suggestions below. I hope they are useful to you.  Happy studying! ¡Buena suerte!

 

In my country, Argentina, we work <em>on</em> average about 8 hours per day. I think it is a lot of time. I think the working day should be about 6 hours per day. Then, we would have more time to learn other things (and to develop us in other areas), read books (which help us to grow as human <em>beings) and</em> spend<em> time</em> with our children (which is very important in childhood).
If things were different, teachers of literature, sports, languages, etc. would have more work and better salaries. Artists would be more appreciated.
In addition, if working days were shorter more people <em>would have jobs</em> (less time, more people to do the work), an interesting way of <em>doing away</em> with unemployment.

 

Or...

..if the working day were shorter...

Do away with = put an end to

30 tháng 6 năm 2015
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