Pretty good Eduarda, just a few spelling mistakes and missing prepositions. Keep practicing and good luck in the US!

Why I want learn english?

I need English for my life. I want to communicate with people, and I intend to travel to the US in the next year. I think english more importante and I'm begining.

Why I want to learn English?

I need English in my life. I want to be able to communicate with people, and I intend to travel to the US in the next year. I think English is important and I'm beginning to learn it.

Why I want  to learn English?

I need English for my life. I want to communicate with people, and I intend to travel to the US in the next year. I think English is very important and I'm beginning.