Thank you for correcting my English writing....
Just now, I accepted 2 writing corrections from 2 sweet italki friends. To my surprise, they both gave a comment about my English at the end, and they were very encouraging. Thank you so much.
I find it effective to write something in the language I am learning, practice it, think about it, correct it to find the mistake, and in this way make progress.
I very much want to speak fluently in English. In my not distant future I want to be a business woman who can communicate with foreigners and do business with them.
I will learn English from you carefully and seriously. Thanks!
(( Good luck! :) ))