Holidays For my summer holidays I want to Irleland with my family. We rented a car and made a road trip. It was a very good experience. We visited different places. Landscapes were wonderful, like Cli

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Holidays For my summer holidays I want to Irleland with my family. We rented a car and made a road trip. It was a very good experience. We visited different places. Landscapes were wonderful, like Cliff of Moher... We loved the city called Kilkenny, We wanted to go seeing whales but our child was too young for that trip, so we were a little disappointed.

4 Thg 08 2015 23:48

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Just one small correction to add it is the Cliffs of Moher (you use the article as it is a place name and the cliffs are plural)

5 tháng 8 năm 2015

Sounds like a nice trip! Here are some corrections/suggestions. Keep up the good work!

Holidays

For my summer holidays I went want to Ireland Irleland with my family. We rented a car and took made a road trip. It was a very good experience. We visited different places. The landscapes were wonderful, like Cliff of Moher... We loved the city of called Kilkenny.

We wanted to go whale watching seeing whales but our child was too young for that trip, so we were a little disappointed.