My Eyes

My eyes are very small, and have a single-edged eyelid[1]. When I am smiling, someone can't see my eyes. They always called me "small eyes". So I am not confident about my appearance. That also became a reason for someone to dislike me. Sometimes I hate myself about "small eyes, big face." but I need to change that. I could turn into my innner beauty. such as improve my cooking. When someone introduces me to someone else, She might say " oh, She is good at cooking, She cooks delicious food."

mistake more natural

[1] Sorry - I don't understand what you mean.

Although you need a space after almost every punctuation mark, you should not put one after a beginning (opening) bracket or quote e.g. " or ' or [{<. "small eyes" "hello" "Good" (etc).