Misa
9/16/2015 In a dim room, he sat bolt upright in bed. In the dark, he blurry saw a man with bandaged head and sling arm looking at him. Suddenly, the light in the room lit up, and he realized that the man he saw was actually his own reflection reflected on a window’s glass panel next to his bed. And he was on a hospital’s bed.
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9/16/2015

In a dim room, he sat bolt upright in bed. In the dark, he saw the blurry image of a man looking at him with bandages on his head and a sling holding his arm. Suddenly, the light in the room lit up, and he realized that the man he saw was actually his own reflection reflected on a window’s glass panel next to his bed. And he was on a hospital’s bed.

 

 

 

Hey Misa:

 

Good job and I like your creative writing.

 

I was away but am back, so if you have any questions, feels free to ask away.

 

Cheers,

--Ravi

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