Hello JeongHyun! ^^

Very good effort in writing your first notebook entry. ^^ The first correction is a title so the first letters of each word is in capital letters. The rest of the corrections is just some minor grammar corrections. ~~~

Charlie

My first writing in italki

>> My First Essay in iTalki.

Hi I am live in korea, i want to travel all of the world it is my dream i found that learnig language is very interest things.

>> Hi, I am living in Korea now but I want to travel all over the world. That is my dream. I found out that learning languages is very interesting.

It is my first time to write things in englsih
Although many mistaken word, please correct my sentence
I will write sentence on this website everday

>> It is my first time to write in English. Although I've made a lot of mistakes, please correct my sentences. I will write sentences on this website everyday.