Miguel Ángel
A Story One day, I was alone and bored in the street. Then I decided to ride bicycle and go to the beach. Suddenly, I fall of the bicycle and I hurt my head. Nobody saw me in that moment on the ground. I had a lot of blood because I had done a big break. A minute or two later, a young couple took me to the hospital quickly, and there, the doctors cured me.
7 Thg 10 2015 18:06
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,,,,,, and there, the doctors cured me.

 

It would be better to say the doctors TREATED YOU.

 

In accident and emergency rooms they TREAT you.

 

Example sentences: They treated me for a broken leg, cuts and bruises. They treated my infection with antibiotics. After lengthy treatment, I was cured! Yippeeeee!

7 tháng 10 năm 2015
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One day, I was alone and bored in the street. Then I decided to ride my bicycle and go to the beach. Suddenly, I fell off the bicycle and I hurt my head. Nobody saw me in that moment on the ground. I lost/there was a lot of blood because I had been hurt badly.
A minute or two later, a young couple took me to the hospital quickly, and there, the doctors cured me.

7 tháng 10 năm 2015
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One day, I was feeling alonely and bored in the street. If you are walking on the street when you felt this, then the sentence should be, "One day, I was feeling lonely and bored as I was walking on the street."  Then I decided to ride my bicycle and go to the beach. Suddenly, as I was cycling, I fell of the bicycle and I hurt my head. Nobody No one saw me in that moment as I hit on the ground. I had a lot of blood because I had done a big break There was much blood loss as I had a gash.


However, a minute or two later, a young couple took/rushed me to the hospital quickly, and there, the doctors there took care of me. cured meYou cannot use "cure" because you are not suffering from an illness or disease.

7 tháng 10 năm 2015
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