Enrique
CV Updating Hi Guys! I´m just updating mi CV and I want to include my current job in it. I think it is "understandable" but I´ would like it to sound natural :D I really appreciate your help, this is the info: • Creation and management of Super Premium segment communications • Creation and updating of product benchmarks • Event management • Support to the Spanish Product Department • Analysis of Projects and campaigns Thanks in advance!
30 Thg 11 2015 22:21
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CV Updating

Hi Guys!

I´m just updating mi CV and I want to include my current job in it.

I think it is "understandable" but I would like it to sound natural :D

I really appreciate your help,

this is the info:

• Creation and management of Super Premium segment communications (creation of communications sounds strange)
• Creation and updating of product benchmarks
• Event management 
• Support to the Spanish Product Department (what did you do?)
• Analysis of Projects and campaigns

Thanks in advance!

 

I think it is hard to add or change this without a reference or more information. And as I work in business I am wondering as to what you actually did. I would provide more details and more action words, but don't make it long. for example:

Established and monitored product benchmarks which improved production quality

30 tháng 11 năm 2015
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