The importance of self study
Self study is a very important element in our life. I have seen many people who spend so much time and money taking courses but don't get any benefits. Why? They rely only on the teacher to teach them but don't take responsibility for their learning. In fact, by using self study, anyone at any age can learn and pursue their dreams. Certainly, it is much more flexible regarding money and time to study by ourselves.What you have written is completely understandable, I've only changed a few bits because that is how I would phrase it
self study does not need capitals (not a proper word) and no hyphen.
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