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Is it ok to use "was when" in this sentence: A complaint I made that I was satisfied with the results was when I bought a new smartphone online from a well-known brand and it turned out to be defective.
29 Thg 07 2023 10:09
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The sentence contains an error. To better reveal the error, let's first simplify the sentence by removing all subordinate clauses: "that I was ... results" and "I made". Also, I'll remove the second independent clause "it turned out to be defective". Your sentence then becomes: "A complaint was when I bought a new smartphone online from a well-known brand." and the error becomes clearly visible. When you say "A complaint was ..." you need to follow up by stating WHAT the complaint was. Instead, you state WHEN the complaint was made. To fix the problem, you must first make a choice. Are you going to state WHAT the complaint was, or WHEN the complaint was made? You could write this: "When I bought a new smartphone online from a well-known brand, it turned out to be defective so I made a complaint."
29 tháng 7 năm 2023
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Let me rewrite your sentence for you: A complaint I made was when I bought a new smartphone online. It was a well-known brand but it turned out to be defective.
29 tháng 7 năm 2023
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Yes, that's alright.
29 tháng 7 năm 2023
I understand that this is an IELTS speaking topic, probably “Talk about a time when you made a complaint and were happy/satisfied with the result” Your answer becomes: A time I made a complaint and was happy with the result was when I bought…
29 tháng 7 năm 2023
A complaint I made that I was NOT satisfied with the results (because this should be the content of the complaint) A time I made a complaint that I was not satisfied with the results was when (better, although this sentence is already a bit wordy). A time was when. Rather than a complaint was when.
29 tháng 7 năm 2023
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