sorry LOL I missed these last two lines! :-) If I were to start a new part-time job, I would like to work at a pet shop, because I have a dog and like taking care of it. I also love puppies very much.

I would like to talk about my part time job. I work at a donut shop. I can eat one donut during my break. I like the donuts but I don’t like crowds. The shop is always crowded on weekends. I feel very tired and I don’t want to work on weekends. Also, I work at a childcare facility. I like to take care of children so I enjoy working there. I have some friends who are elementary school students. They are really cute. I sometimes go on excursions with the children, such as to aquariums and trampoline parks. In addition, I work at a restaurant. I'm not good at customer service, so I'm not interested in that part-time job. However, it is the job I’ve had the longest , and I have been working there for a year. your English is very clear, I just tidied up your grammar. Great work :-) If I were to start a new part-time job, I would like to work at a pet shop. Because I have a dog and like to take care of it. I also love puppies very much.