Rebeca Alguacil
I believe that the current environmental problems are solvable if we all come together to help the world. The government needs to implement measures which are executed differently from the current ones to combat the gases polluting the environment, considering their significant impact towards the planet's pollution.
3 Thg 01 2024 14:00
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I believe that the current environmental problems would be solvable if we all came together to help the world. To combat the gases polluting the environment, the government needs to implement measures which are applied differently from the current ones, considering their significant impact towards the planet's pollution.
Well done...you used some interesting vocabulary and structures. Just a suggestion: It is best to use second conditional for hypothetical ideas. In my opinion, in the final sentence, the word order did not sound natural so I moved it around. Keep up the good work!
3 tháng 1 năm 2024
I believe that the current environmental problems are solvable if we all come together to help the world. The government needs to implement measures which can be executed differently from the current ones to combat the gases polluting the environment, considering their significant impact towards the total of the planet's pollution.
4 tháng 1 năm 2024
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