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Good morning, it is sunny today. I am going to the university for the first time in a while. I will take tge online lectures at my university. I am happy to meet my friends. Going out during the mourning is very good, I feel better about my self.
10 Thg 06 2021 00:40
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Good morning, it is sunny today. I am going to the university for the first time in a while. I will take the online lectures at my university. I am happy to meet my friends. Going out during the morning is very good, I feel better about myself.
I agree, I plan to go out in the morning more often. Do you still have to take online lectures even though you can go to the university?
10 tháng 6 năm 2021
Good morning! It is sunny today (you should separate this in to 2 sentences). I am going to the university for the first time in a while and I am happy to meet my friends. I will also take online lectures at my university (I'm assuming that you mean you go to actual classes and also online classes). I feel good about myself when I go out in the morning (you used passive voice; probably a better way to word it is something like this).
Good job! I mostly just moved some words around. A lot of native speakers struggle with passive voice, too. 😀
10 tháng 6 năm 2021
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