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Dear Sister, I saw you are hiring volunteers and I'm interested in becoming a volunteer to share in the community's daily life. Are you still accepting volunteers for this summer? I'm working for a school, so I'm flexible with the time, anytime between June to August works for me. I volunteered for a monastery (xx Abbey) with my mother before, but she is over 55 now. I chose to work for a 501(c)(3) charitable organization after graduating because I considered spiritual life a priority. The co-founders consider the organization as an "apostolic hobby". I am passionate about volunteering and am currently teaching English to a beginner for a church-based community center. I have a lot of time available during my school holidays, so I am eager to take on this work! Thank you for taking the time to consider my application, and please let me know if you need more information. I look forward to your reply. Kind regards, X
26 Thg 03 2025 01:54
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Subject: Volunteer Inquiry Dear Sister, I saw that you are hiring volunteers, and I’m interested in becoming one to share in the community’s daily life. Are you still accepting volunteers for this summer? I work for a school, so I have a flexible schedule and can volunteer anytime between June and August. Previously, I volunteered at [XX Abbey] with my mother, though she is now over 55. After graduating, I chose to work for a 501(c)(3) charitable organization because I consider spiritual life a priority. The co-founders describe the organization as an “apostolic hobby.” I am passionate about volunteering and currently teach English to a beginner at a church-based community center. With ample free time during my school holidays, I am eager to dedicate myself to this work. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. Please let me know if you need any further information. I look forward to your reply. Kind regards, [X]
1. “I saw you are hiring volunteers” → “I saw that you are hiring volunteers” (More natural structure) 2. “I’m interested in becoming a volunteer to share in the community’s daily life.” → “I’m interested in becoming one to share in the community’s daily life.” (Avoids repeating “volunteer”) 3. “I work for a school, so I’m flexible with the time, anytime between June to August works for me.” → “I work for a school, so I have a flexible schedule and can volunteer anytime between June and August.” (Smoother phrasing) 4. “I chose to work for a 501(c)(3) charitable organization after graduating because I considered spiritual life a priority.” → “After graduating, I chose to work for a 501(c)(3) charitable organization because I consider spiritual life a priority.” (Improved clarity and flow) 5. “I have a lot of time available during my school holidays” → “With ample free time during my school holidays” (More natural phrasing)
27 tháng 3 năm 2025
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