Once I went shopping in a specific shopping center in my city and there I saw one of my old friends that I had not seen her for a ling time. It was a nice coincidence for me
Once I went shopping in a shopping center in my city and I saw one of my old friends that I had not seen for a long time. It was a nice coincidence
Really great piece of writing! Excellent use of the past perfect 👌🏾! The edits that I made weren't because they were grammatically wrong, just that they cut the natural flow of the sentence and weren't needed :)
To step it up for next time, it would be great for you to start expanding your vocab and ideas and exploring amplifiers such as "it was such a wonderful coincidence because...."
2 tháng 10 năm 2021
1
1
Bạn muốn tiến bộ xa hơn?
Hãy tham gia cộng đồng học tập này và thử nghiệm những bài tập miễn phí!
zohreh
Kỹ năng ngôn ngữ
Tiếng Ả Rập, Tiếng A-déc-bai-dan, Tiếng Anh, Tiếng Ba Tư (Farsi)