Correct a Short Passage Please????
Hello! I wrote a short passage in English, it's very important to me, i was wonder whether there could be a native English speaker can help me to correct it ?? I'm really appreciate it ! If you can help please tell me. I would love to correct your Chinese, hehe~ thanks~

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Correct a Short Passage Please????
Hello!  I wrote a short passage in English, it's very important to me, i was wonder whether there could be a native English speaker can help me to correct it ?? I'm really appreciate it ! If you can help please tell me. I would love to correct your Chinese, hehe~ thanks~

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Hello! I wrote a short passage in English. It's very important to me, and I was wondering whether there could be a native English speaker that could help me to correct it? I'd really appreciate it! If you can help please tell me. I would love to correct your Chinese, hehe~ thanks~

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