Please correct if I have made any gramatical mistakes. and rewrite it in a professional way.
It is with great pleasure that I accept your offer to join in Infosys as a Java developer. The goals you outlined for the position are well-matched to my abilities, and I consider it a privilege to join your team.

I look forward to working with you and the Infosys team. I will report to work on 21-05-2012 as I have a notice period of two in the present company. . In the meantime, feel free to call me at 99************.....

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Please correct if I have made any gramatical mistakes. and rewrite it in a professional way.
It is with great pleasure that I accept your offer to join in Infosys  as a Java developer. The goals you outlined for the position are well-matched to my abilities, and I consider it a privilege to join your team.

I look forward to working with you and the Infosys  team. I will report to work on 21-05-2012 as I have a notice period of two in the present company. . In the meantime, feel free to call me at 99************.....

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Thank you Mr.Brad

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Grammar is fine, but I would change the following sentence:

"I have a notice period of two in the present company. . "  to
"I have a notice period of two weeks at my present company. "

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