Could you check the grammar? The first picture was taken when I was 15 years old. The second one was taken by my friend yesterday. Although about 7 years have passed, I've not changed… I still love t

Miku

Could you check the grammar? The first picture was taken when I was 15 years old. The second one was taken by my friend yesterday. Although about 7 years have passed, I've not changed… I still love the french horn! It'll never change.

23 Thg 04 2014 04:00

Câu trả lời · 5

The "French" in "French horn" should be capitalized. Also, what will never change—the horn or you? If it is the horn, then your "it'll" is fine, but if it is you then the pronoun should be "I'll." Otherwise, fine.

23 tháng 4 năm 2014

I agree with Brad, but would suggest you could change 'It'll never change' to 'That'll never change' then the reference to you loving the French horn will be more clear, as 'that' will refer to your emotional state.

23 tháng 4 năm 2014

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