Can anyone help me correct a short paragraph? Studying in a foreign country has always been my dream. It was two years ago that I finally stepped forward to this by enrolling in a five-week language program in New York. Though it took all my savings from over the years, I still believe that this experience was worthy since it not only expanded my global perspective but made me determine to pursue further education. *I'll be grateful for your help! Thank you very much! : )