Please help me make this sentence sound right Hello! Today I had an argument with my boss about this text. It is a letter to the employees in our company from HR Deparment. I was supposed to translate it from Russian into English and she said I had made a few mistakes. I disagree and I'd like to listen to your opinions, dear native speakers. In accordance with the requirements of the Russian legislation, Rules of Internal Labor Order were amended. Starting from March 1st, 2015 the advance payment will be taking place on the 21st of each month (instead of 20th). Employees making recurring payments and transactions are recommended to take into consideration this information. Her corrections: 1. in accordance with the requirements of Russian legislation (to omit "the", and she is probably right) 2. the advance payment wil take place on the 21st monthly (instead of 20th) So, who is right in this situation? And in general does this text make sence? Does it sound good?