I am trying to write an E-mail in Japanese
Hello there, I hope it is alright to post something like this here, maybe it will be good practice for budding Japanese translators! I am writing to my favourite Japanese group and was hoping someone could help me translate the following:

"I am a big fan from South Africa. It would mean so much if you would sing 'too much love will kill you' by Queen for me. My dream is to see you live some day, I love you all!"

I would be most grateful for any help.

Many thanks in advance

Question

I am trying to write an E-mail in Japanese
Hello there, I hope it is alright to post something like this here, maybe it will be good practice for budding Japanese translators! I am writing to my favourite Japanese group and was hoping someone could help me translate the following:

"I am a big fan from South Africa. It would mean so much if you would sing 'too much love will kill you' by Queen for me. My dream is to see you live some day, I love you all!"

I would be most grateful for any help.

Many thanks in advance

Answer

私は、あなた方の大ファンの南アフリカ人です。
クイーンの「too much love will kill you」を私のために歌ってくれたら、どんなに嬉しいか。
いつの日か、あなた方のライブを観ることが私の夢です。
大好きでーす！

I tried to translate it as natural as possible!
I hope this would be of any help.