this is well written?
Well, I would say that in my short life I have seen many animes, some more good than others, but they all or the great majority have made impression on me, but without doubt my anime favorite is Fairy Tail♥ for absolutely everything quite simply I am charmed with~

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this is well written?
Well, I would say that in my short life I have seen many animes, some more good than others, but they all or the great majority have made impression on me, but without doubt my anime favorite is Fairy Tail♥  for absolutely everything quite simply I am charmed with~

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It's a great start!  It reads like one very long sentence and a few changes are needed.

Well, I would say that in my short life I have seen many animes, some BETTER than others.  They HAVE ALMOST all made AN impression on me, but without doubt my FAVORITE ANIME is Fairy Tail♥.  Absolutely everything ABOUT IT simply charmed ME.

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