Certain people are prone to claim , is it ok to start an essay?
Some ideas which I need to have checked , please
1. Prone to claim
2.the historical buildings are live history
3.even we can take account of the architecture of an old / ancient cathedral
4 .if the government rented monuments it would save up money to the state

Thank you very much

Question

Certain people are prone to claim , is it ok to start an essay?
Some ideas which I need to have checked , please
1. Prone to claim
2.the historical buildings are live history
3.even we can take account of the architecture of an old / ancient cathedral
4 .if the government  rented monuments it would save up money to the state

Thank you very much

Answer

I would personally write it this way:

"Some people are apt to claim that historical buildings are living history. However, even if we take into account the architectural value of an ancient cathedral, it would save the government money to rent out these monuments."

"Apt to" is more natural than "prone to."
"Living history" is more natural than "live history."
"The architectural value" seems more natural, because it parallels the idea of monetary value.
"To rent out" seems more natural to me than "to rent."