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can someone correct this text for me plz?
Hello everyone,
I will be grateful if someone correct this text;
Social media at home and at school
Today, everyone is using social media everytime and everywhere. It made a part of our daily activities./( It become our daily habit.)
I’m also one of them who is busy on social midia, but not too much. I usually use What’sApp, imo, tumblr and Telegram. I post some storys and photo’s on them and regularly chat with my family and friends. Beside of them I use some Apps for learning langauges, like italki and speaky. I build thier new frieds for over the world to practies languags and improve my skill. And also I post some discussions and notes. I sometimes give comments on their posts and like their pictures and storys. I help some people who want to learn my natieve language.
i will write the rest of this text to an other Guestion, cuz I'm not able to write more than 1000 words here in this platform.
advance thanks
regards, Sash❤
23 Thg 09 2018 00:41
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Social media at home and school
Everyone nowadays uses social media all the time and everywhere. It makes a huge part of our daily activities./( It is becoming a daily habit.) <---The one in the parentheses seems more fit.
I consider myself one of them as I'm always kind of busy on social media. I usually use WhatsApp, IMO, Tumblr, and Telegram. I post some stories and photos there and chat with my family and friends regularly. Besides that, I use many applications for learning languages like italki and Speaky. I have made new friends there from all over the world to practice languages and improve skills. Also, I post discussions and notes. I, sometimes, comment on their posts and like their pictures and stories. Moreover, I help people who want to learn my native language.
I will write the rest of the text in another question since I'm not able to write more than 1000 word here on this platform.
Thanks in advance.
23 tháng 9 năm 2018
ok i will do it
23 tháng 9 năm 2018
Nanren888- 新西兰 Not in the discussion, but in the Notebook section.
23 tháng 9 năm 2018
Easier in discussions, as there there are tools for corrections.
23 tháng 9 năm 2018
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