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Victoria Tikhomirova
i need your help. Is it gramatically right?
My name is Maria Khutornaya and I’m 23 years old. Now I study at Bryansk State University named after Academician I.G. Petrovsky at faculty of technology and design to become a fine arts teacher. In 2013 I finished school and entered Oryol State University named after I.S. Turgenev to study soil science. In 2017 I graduated with distinction from the university.
My family is consists of my parents, my brother and me. I was born in Bryansk region, Klimovsky district, Rubezhnoe village, but I live in Bryansk now.
I like drawing so I decided to become a teacher of art. Besides, my hobbies are reading books and needlework.
I think that’s the most interesting facts about me.
6 Thg 01 2019 10:06
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It's not grammatically perfect but it is passable and understandable for sure. With some more practice you'll develop a more naturally fluent writing style. It's clear you have the knowledge and skills, it won't be long before you tie everything up together and you'll be writing as if English is your mother language.
6 tháng 1 năm 2019
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You did great actually
6 tháng 1 năm 2019
It's not a question, it's rather a kind of CV. I think it would be better to put it in the "notebook" (https://www.italki.com/notebooks/english), which is meant specially to put there texts (essays, notes, etc) that are expected to be corrected. You'll have much better chances there.
6 tháng 1 năm 2019
*My hobbies are reading and sewing
6 tháng 1 năm 2019
*There are 4 members in my family...
6 tháng 1 năm 2019
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