The snow gives me a feeling of calm, is this correct?
Should I rewrite it like:
When I go to the snow this gives me a calm feeling .

Thank you

Question

The snow gives me a feeling of calm, is this correct?
Should I rewrite it like: 
When I go to the snow this gives me  a calm feeling .

Thank you

Answer

I would decide if it's seeing the snow or walking in the snow that makes you feel calm and then either write it based on that or keep it generic.

I find snow calming.
I find walking in the snow calming.
I find looking at the snow calming.

I find looking at snow *(on the trees/ground/hills) gives me a calm feeling.

*optional

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Watching the falling snow relaxes me. 
The quiet of a snowy landscape is very peaceful and puts me at ease. 
Looking out the window at a snow-covered field always soothes me.

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The first is perfect. The second is incorrect- one doesn’t go to the snow. One can be surrounded by snow or be around snow and then one feels calm.

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