Ali
Please correct my sentence to make it more natural I came into your room last night while you were sleeping and I closed the window.
4 Thg 10 2019 14:21
Câu trả lời · 4
You can also make it more natural with just a small change, like so: - I came into your room last night while you were sleeping to close the window. - Last night, I came into your room to close the window while you were sleeping.
4 tháng 10 năm 2019
Thank you :D
4 tháng 10 năm 2019
For one, you dont need the second “I”. But in general to sound more natural, if you’re speaking, you break it up more. “While you were sleeping” is awkwardly placed and phrased, so I would change that part the most. Something like “ I had to close your window last night. Shit was so cold I dont how you were sleeping in that.” It depends on context but yeah you also want to avoid sounding creepy in most contexts lol because before the “and I closed the window” you’d be getting some weird looks
4 tháng 10 năm 2019
Bạn vẫn không tìm thấy được các câu trả lời cho mình?
Hãy viết xuống các câu hỏi của bạn và để cho người bản xứ giúp bạn!