Is my translation correct?
Hi! I'm trying to translate the title of my diploma work in English, and I'm not sure if it sounds correct.

"Title of thesis (Dissertation Topic?): Developing CRM system on a base 1C:Enterprise and integrating it with services of SMS, email and sip telephony"

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Is my translation correct?
Hi! I'm trying to translate the title of my diploma work in English, and I'm not sure if it sounds correct.

"Title of thesis (Dissertation Topic?): Developing CRM system on a base 1C:Enterprise and integrating it with services of SMS, email and sip telephony"

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If it were I, I would have written like this:
The title of the paper: Intigrating CRM system on a chip of 1C: Developing it with services of SMS, email and telephony call, and commercialization."
or
Developing CRM system on base of 1C:
 Intigrating it with services of SMS, email and telephony call, and commercialization."