I ate ice cream with my family last night. It was a limited time flavor and really yummy. My sister, my cousin, and I went for a walk at midnight yesterday. It was a little scary, but we had a good ti

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I ate ice cream with my family last night. It was a limited time flavor and really yummy. My sister, my cousin, and I went for a walk at midnight yesterday. It was a little scary, but we had a good time. We went to Costco today. I ate a hot dog and drank orange juice. I was so full after that, but it made me happy.

22 Thg 06 2025 02:59

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Limited-time flavor. I would encourage you to use more paragraph spacing when you make changes to the subject focus. Also, try to use more connectors to organise your writing. I can help here. Feel free to message me for any doubts about anything I've written. Well done on your entry! As it is clear and understandable.

22 Thg 06 2025 03:55

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